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A Ripe Peach

Love is a ripe peach It can be sweet and juicy But can be the pits Russell Sivey Entrant into ~ SKAT ~'s "Define Love!" contest 9/1/2012

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Lee Ramage

Date: 9/7/2012 11:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Sounds alot like my life... more pits than sweetness. ;) Lee

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 9/7/2012 1:49:00 PM

A belated congrats on your win, Russell! Love your senryu!! Hugs, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2012 8:49:00 AM

congrats Russell on a fantastic first place win defining love luv.. superb..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/6/2012 6:26:00 AM

APPLAUSE!!! TAKE A BOW!! This is a great parallel to marriage...yep, watch out for those pits! I am trying to read til I reach the candy corn poem..how many more til I get to that candy corn? mmmmm gooood.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/6/2012 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your no 1 winner Russell humour too. xx

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 9/6/2012 1:57:00 AM

lol. How true!! Well done on your high placement in the contest, Russell. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:06:00 PM

Russell, congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. i love the sweet way you defined love with it's own ending contradiction,,,,xox~pd

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/5/2012 10:16:00 AM

ha ha! Great haiku :) Congrats on your win!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/5/2012 10:12:00 AM

Fantastic and beautiful piece,Russel.Fine senryu.Congratulations on your delightful win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 7:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/5/2012 6:25:00 AM

Congradulation on your win! Light & Love

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/4/2012 7:42:00 PM

Love your definition...so true! Awesome write, congrats on your win. Hugs

Skat A

Date: 9/4/2012 6:02:00 PM

RUSSELL, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT

Jack Horne

Date: 9/1/2012 1:34:00 PM

lol, yes, so true : )