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A Rich Man?

wealthy greedy eyes hoarding shiny diamonds poverty of soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/19/2010 11:19:00 AM
Yes it is a pitiful shame, and the wealthy cannot see a thing wrong with that. Thanks Shirley for sharing this plain truth for anyone to see, if they had any compassion. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely Senryu being Featured Shirley. I know it is confusing for many to know the difference between Senryu and Haiku. So nice that you are aware of that difference. Your last line really ties up this gem with a bright bow! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:07:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Enjoy the honour. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Shirley. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2010 8:49:00 PM
Congrats Shirley on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to share with us all.. with luv..
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Date: 7/28/2010 2:21:00 AM
this is especially awesome. Harry
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Date: 7/18/2010 11:16:00 AM
So much truth in this piece Shirley, WNN
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Date: 7/17/2010 12:57:00 PM
Hello Shirley: Great poem!!! I reminds me of the story of the rich man and the poor man in the bible. Have a great day! Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 7/15/2010 9:10:00 PM
lovely and true money can't buy you everything, there's probably something missing for this rich man, enjoyed..P.D.
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