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A Rhyming Hurt

(22/11/2013) You give me a long stare Dig a big hollow then depart Life has never been fair Why has hurt always hugged my heart?

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Date: 2/18/2016 11:57:00 AM

Dinda, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA

Date: 1/19/2014 11:02:00 AM

This is really sweet and sincere. I love that line: why has hurt always hugged my heart? A really unique way to say it.

Date: 12/6/2013 2:05:00 AM

Heartfelt and honest rhymes are my favorite. I love the way you build your rhymes and glue them together with emotion. Awesome

Date: 11/24/2013 1:55:00 PM

ohh my, dinda... deeply moving in its reflective sway..:) wonderflu!.. huggs

Date: 11/23/2013 11:44:00 AM

a human emotion none of us like to feel very good poem

Date: 11/22/2013 12:27:00 PM

Dinda, ouch! The imagery of pain hugging me hurts... Enjoyed ~:) Hugs* SKAT

Date: 11/21/2013 1:03:00 PM

some look for love and find an empty bag.