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A Rhyme At Night

Night has cast her darkened net over the sphere of the bold, gently laying out the black starred with orbs foretold Sheets of mist bedaub the earth glistening strands of green, second shades stain the trees daubed with a greying sheen Golden flowers rise to greet the night opening their petals of soul, swaying slowly with no might within this a story unfolds Cicadas croon to the southern Imps it echoes along a tight string, the grasshoppers not to be outdone begin to raucously sing Eventide sweeps across the skyline in moving shadows of light, in it dip the sleeves of my soul within is the body I write Across the cusp a half moon of life begins to spill into day, retreating from the growing bright down my being must lay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/6/2014 4:07:00 AM
I usually try to pick out a favorite line or verse when I comment but I can't do it here...Okay, okay! Next to last verse and the next to last line! Your mention of cicadas brings back sweet childhood memories...
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Date: 2/4/2014 9:55:00 AM
really good at your word choice, i see your creativity in each image that you write, jayne... huggs and see you again!
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Date: 2/4/2014 7:28:00 AM
Hi Jayne love this and thanks to Tim for pointing the way xx
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Date: 2/3/2014 9:37:00 PM
Smooth and sweet, Jayne! Great work! Jimbo
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:18:00 PM
this is very nice, Jayne and I hope to see more of you at Soup.
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:59:00 PM
Beautiful. I love the flow and the mood it evokes. SuZ
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Date: 2/2/2014 6:38:00 AM
- A lovely writing poetry, Jayne - I like it - well done - Have a great Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/2/2014 6:56:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise I am very happy you liked it :) love Jayne x

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