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A Retelling of An Unfortunate Event

The water of the firth Glitters; glinting, clean. Messenger of joy and mirth, Yet tyrant, cruel. An ideal place to fish for a young boy and his friend. They are seven years old - grinning wide, their rods well-tended. But, what’s that? Some money has dropped into the froth: “Fear not lads, I’ll be two ticks!” says dad, his boots still on. That day the sea played tyrant. Life was lost beneath the waves. The boy’s grins appeared no longer: his dad could not be saved. Silent sorrow grew within him, and pervaded every joy. He was no longer the same grinning little boy. Days of future struggles lay before his gaze. He could not know that after long, clouds do dissipate. True enough the shadows, gave way to blazing lights. “The winter now is over”, he said. His grin was bright.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/27/2016 3:24:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Megan. :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:15:00 PM
Megan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/21/2016 8:34:00 PM
Megan,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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