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A Redneck Vacation

~When retired Redneck take a vacation, Needs not AARP’s senior discounts, Motel tarpaulin costs are his passion, A Redneck needs not large bank cash amounts. ~Give him some worms that squirm and North Fork Creek, With wilderness trees, he’s very well pleased, I’m Redneck quite sleek , have my own technique, Head where wildlife frees, in mountain air breeze. ~My food still on hoof, venison is great, There’s fish a plenty, may ride my Jenny, Don’t need a debate, I’ll call my love Kate, She’ll rough it with me, loves to fish you-see, ~Get Jenny some grain, I’ll clip her long mane, City dudes are vain, drives Rednecks insane! For and in Honor of: Carol Brown And Contest: It’s Time For Vacation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/7/2011 12:03:00 PM
Hey, this is really cool, john. YOu did an awesome job telling it like a redneck!! I loved the part that your food is "on hoof!" congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/6/2011 2:35:00 PM
Creative win..SK
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Date: 5/6/2011 1:40:00 PM
LOL Many congrats on your win, John : )
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Date: 5/6/2011 3:45:00 AM
This would make any redneck proud, John. Many congrats on your GREAT WIN. lainie
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Date: 5/5/2011 10:12:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to rednecks. many congrats for this win Moses.
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:24:00 PM
hehey, moe.. greeat stuff and well deserving of the glory win.. you wow me; CONGRATS! :) huggs!
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Date: 5/5/2011 2:10:00 PM
Hey John, It is great to so you and Carolyn taking the top spots for this contest. Amazing idea of a vacation. You should write for Jeff Foxworthy!!! You could freshen up his redneck material. All kiddin aside, my mom's side of the family is from Mt. Sterling and we are very proud of our heritage. I love rednecks,....every darn one of them!! Keep the ink flowing...Kate sounds great too!
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:25:00 PM
Congrats on your 2nd Place win, John. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:20:00 PM
Congrats Moses my friend on your super win in the vacation contest with this fine adventure in poetry ..enjoy luv..
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:44:00 PM
Can't tell you how pleased I am to see you ranking so high in Carol's contest, John. Congratulations, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:29:00 PM
congrats on your win..cory
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:17:00 PM
Very nice job. Congrats
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congatulations on the second place win in the contest, John
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations Moses on your 2nd place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2011 2:11:00 PM
John,good luck in Carol's contest. My necks not red, but I could really relate to your poem. City boy!!!
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Date: 4/26/2011 1:08:00 PM
Such a fun poem for Carol's contest!!! Great job, John....so lighthearted is this entry!! (And many many thanks for the honor you gave my poem in your recent contest!! I'm so pleased you liked it!! Thanks again...love, Carrie
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:04:00 AM
Hello, John! Happy Easter to you! Great poem you created here :) Have a pleasant time today. Thank you for all the comments you leave on my poems. I really appreciate every time you stop by. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 4/24/2011 7:25:00 AM
Good morning John, how are you on this beautiful Easter morning... I love the poem. And it had me smiling.... have a great one... God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 4/24/2011 6:18:00 AM
This is not my kind of vacation but it is definately a GRRRReat poem for this contest! Have blessed Easter. If u are a redneck, John, then perhaps you are related to me. Gwendolen
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Date: 4/23/2011 11:55:00 PM
NIcely done, john. You are "reeling" in some GREAT poetry for us this weekend. I really enjoyed this.
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Date: 4/22/2011 3:42:00 PM
Been there and done that ....I hope that you have fun relaxing by the open fire fighting off the mosquitoes..Reads like a winning work..Good luck in the contest...Sara
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:56:00 AM
That's a great way to travel John,my way too so loved it all the more.Simply Awesome!!One of the finest pieces I'm reading today.Good luck in the contest,Gautami
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:29:00 AM
Awesome! Best of luck in the contest and thanks for your every wonderful comments on my poetry~~
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Date: 4/21/2011 6:20:00 AM
LOL great fun, John : )
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