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A Red Sunset For a Special Valentine

I have painted a red sunset for a special valentine on the largest and finest canvas known to Mankind, with happy visions of lovers sailing on a ship dazzled by light, hoping that love will make their adventerous hearts bind! Come, sweetheart let's escape and dream, where this rose-petals-covered sea may lead, with your head resting on my shoulder, and my warm hands hands spread across your fast-beating heart...to revive romance! I have honored the memory of this Cupid's day with sweet intent, with something that will outlast beauty and time, and without a signed name to identify its artist... they will gess who he was and feel how intense was his desire! Let's sit on the deck and watch the parade of the erogenous stars, and each of them is a dream that will be revealed by fate as kisses inflamed by passion, make love more intense and pleasurable... nothing we'll be withheld, or left unsaid in these embraces so sentimental! I have painted a red sunset for a special Valentine, for that one deserving recognition as a token of my endless gratitude; and my dedication will unveil the scope of my amplitude... cherish it, lover to remind you of someone whose love was too sublime!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/16/2010 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's Contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:07:00 PM
I love how you weave words!! Great love poem! Your friend..
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Date: 2/15/2010 3:33:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem in Mac's contest .. an amazing poem .. an amazing win .. for an amazing poet.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:50:00 AM
Tnks for your Kind comments..Im reading this poem and its like seeing an artist with a brush painting Rainbows.a beauty,,Charma
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:37:00 AM
I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Andrew. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2010 10:49:00 AM
Now this would be exactly how I'd love to spend Valentine's Day -- at sea surrounded by a red sunset and in the arms of a man who appreciates me. So beautiful, Andrew! You're a man after my own heart. Had a boat for ten years and really miss it now. Much love and a Happy Valentine's Day to you, dear friend! Carolyn
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Date: 2/7/2010 9:47:00 AM
Magnificent Andrew.. special words and depth of meaning in this "beauty" of your creativeness... your words are quite intense.. thankxxx for a wonderful read.. on a happy Sunday...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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