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A Real Real Spicy Kick Three Hundred Fifty Words Form a Hot Chili Pepper

""Entirely you know I cannot change the whole of the World all on my own." - "Or can I?" "I mean whom better to start with?"" ""Yes, finding I am; Humility raises no defense or real doubt for- nor rouses up no great fear against - one better yet yes offers no consequence." to anyone, thing; "freely bow's down; in only direct reflection to itself."" "So yes rather than win can you lose be rather wrong than right - surrender everything keep stirring the pot friend yes not let the beans burn." - "Yeah ha Ha ho yo oh yes don't you know how hard out of my way I'd be sure to go just to avoid that?"" ""I am so-curious; "Brilliant!" everything is used for something, so to Grace I lend a knee; heart, open mind hand."" - "Some barter's made yes some sold are bought and sold and re-bought again and again. entirely" - ""Heaven knows I have bought that Farm before; sold a lot of priceless - valuables in my time I cannot ever wage enough collateral to buy back." "My very soul included, Ex-Wife Life - Children, yeah I tell you I sold it all, yes, my entire family."" - "Vivid" fond their memory's"- But I would not change a thing, if I had to do it all again. ""Yes time and time again; Because I wouldn't be the man I am today if it were not for all of the mistakes; lessons learned, of my past. "But you know I know I could never-barter with God for any true faith in my own security." - No no I cannot bargain with Him, to reach a place, vision as Blissful Peaceful; Pure; as that; "HEAVEN!" ""So to fill a weary soul, He taught me, a bowl of Copperhead soup." "Well I tell you now friend sure makes for a fine; cleansing-dish."" ""With white-wine salad lemon pepper chard finger size copperhead steak patty's on the side - "Lima beans - fresh milk cornbread yeah they all provide a quick cooling, for a real real; spicy kick ... !""

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Tom Arnone

Date: 7/31/2016 3:23:00 PM

Sometime, before I die, I will have to try copperhead soup (or a similar reptile based amalgamation).... :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2016 8:54:00 PM

James, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/30/2016 6:40:00 AM

James, love the way you centered the poem..:), Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

James Long
Date: 7/30/2016 11:01:00 AM

JUST INCREDIBLE. Thank you for your kind welcome and comments on this work friend. I am a Widow, I have two step children, as well. Oh but I am single, looking to grow old now with someone.