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A Rare Place

~~~~ He wandered far from the well trodden path into the forest dense. Tall trees, that spread under a canopy of gold and green, allowed the late afternoon sun to pierce the tiny gaps between the foliage. Reflecting shafts of milky white vapour like heavenly arrows of silken gauze arising way beyond the highest tree. The air was silent, only nature breathed. The man sat down beside a grassy knoll his body resting on the gentle slope. Unburdened by the cares of day, he slept. ~~~~ Margaret Foster Written. 3rd September 2014

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Date: 9/30/2014 12:01:00 PM
Incredible imagery - you painted such a peaceful scene:-) many congrats on your win. Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/30/2014 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem Margaret.
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Date: 9/30/2014 5:46:00 AM
Soothing images, congrats on the win, Margaret
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:12:00 AM
this is so interesting how you describe this place and in the end, all so he can go to sleep in this most restful and beautiful place Very nice, Margaret.
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Date: 9/6/2014 12:20:00 AM
Such images of a man getting away we all need to get away somedays
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Date: 9/3/2014 6:37:00 AM
Lush, peaceful images. I have been known to wander in the forest looking for places like this that beckon you to sit and rest and just be. I am faving this one.
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