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A Random Note To Jew

You tell me now how it used to be While I can only weep For how it should have been And lost memory Of the hillside steep The bench on a little field of green Where all night you said you cried With my courage impotent by your side Strange, through each strand of lighted day The hope of night remains The star that guides the heart To our unseen promise here today The little stains Of doubt like bats with daylight part. And love reclaims its throne O what pity I own Can words tell you still The sorrow of my heart What apology can right what's past Except the will That's longer than the night is short And we the hope of all we lost In him, and him alone, our truth to seek To hang on hair a weighty prayer meek I pray that God will give again A second chance to you and me And grandchildren for the garden rare Where jasmines soothe the nights of pain And love stills the memory In the little room we'll share For the greatest wealth on earth to me Shall simply be our family.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/27/2010 8:18:00 AM
A pleasure to read your creative poetry today David. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:09:00 PM
What a wonderful expression of the love you must have for this person. I, too, pray that God gives us all a second chance at correcting those things in life that upon reflection we regret. Keep up the great work! Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:58:00 PM
David, I do hope ou get that second chance. It sounds like you had a very special woman in your life. Maybe it can still work out. Very moving poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:52:00 AM
the will That's longer than the night is short I loved that line! Also I loved your mention of "the greatest wealth" simply to be family. As I recall, Jew is short name for an old loved one, right? You will have to tell me what happened to her! Luv, andrea
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:48:00 AM
A masterpiece David.. lines of simple beauty in free verse with touches of rhyme that impart a brilliant message luv... a special creative piece my friend ..enjoyed this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:45:00 AM
What a beautiful piece, David. A beautiful prayer and I wish you and joy God's blessings, always..goes to my favs! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:30:00 AM
david, you did a wonderful job of expression. i like your lines, smooth, transitional and personable. thank you, chuck
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:58:00 AM
Very creative and interesting write on A random note to jew, David
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