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A Rainy Day's Surrender

While drizzles of day dreams reveal a rainy day’s surrender, the mist sprays lightly and I sense a tingling refreshment. On the tips of my toes the puddles encompass; so tender- The slight ray of sun becomes the center of my contentment. The mist sprays lightly and I sense a tingling refreshment. I deluge in the scent of Spring’s soft endearment flourishing. The slight ray of sun becomes the center of my contentment, as I open my mouth for a taste it’s so natural and nourishing. I deluge in the scent of Spring’s soft endearment flourishing. I close my eyes and embrace the touch it gives my forehead- As I open my mouth for a taste it’s so natural and nourishing, I twirl around with a delighted smile and arms widely spread. I close my eyes and embrace the touch it gives my forehead- The downpour brings flashbacks of my youth spent with my love. I twirl around with a delighted smile and arms widely spread, as I become infatuated with the water flowing from up above. The downpour brings flashbacks of my youth spent with my love. He has always flooded me with the moisture of his gentle kiss. As I become infatuated with the water flowing from up above, I feel a wave of enlightenment and I start to quietly reminisce. He has always flooded me with the moisture of his gentle kiss. Within a single breath I am taken away to a waterfall of wonder. I feel a wave of enlightenment and I start to quietly reminisce, for beauty can be found even when surrounded by the thunder. Within a single breath I am taken away to a waterfall of wonder. On the tips of my toes the puddles encompass; so tender- For beauty can be found even when surrounded by the thunder, while drizzles of day dreams reveal a rainy day’s surrender. Rain - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Date Written: August 12, 2016

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Date: 8/29/2016 4:04:00 PM
I love this poem XX
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Date: 8/16/2016 1:05:00 PM
"For beauty can be found even when surrounded by the thunder".... That is so true!... I really enjoyed reading this beautiful, romantic poem, Laura. Congratulations on a well deserved win!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 5:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Kelly, and it's crazy when I see your profile pic because I swear we are twins! It may not look like it to you if you look at my pic but when I showed my daughter and hubby they were freaked out a little! lol Have a blessed evening lovely Kelly :)-luloo
Date: 8/16/2016 10:52:00 AM
Always love your romantic poems,Laura!Congrats and thanks for sharing your poems!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 5:16:00 PM
awww thank you very much Sara :)-luloo
Date: 8/16/2016 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your rainy, I mean lovely win:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 5:16:00 PM
lol! cute response Jo! many thanks :)-luloo
Date: 8/15/2016 11:28:00 PM
It's full of romance & love. I enjoyed reading it very much. Congratulations on your win, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 5:15:00 PM
thank you Afzal :)-luloo
Date: 8/15/2016 10:53:00 PM
Congrats on the win of this beautiful and romantic poem ...
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 5:15:00 PM
thank you so much Probir :)-luloo
Date: 8/15/2016 9:01:00 PM
Great liquified, nostalgic pantoum, Laura. Congrats! :-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 5:14:00 PM
thank you very much Tom :)-luloo
Date: 8/15/2016 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great pantoum, complicated form.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 5:14:00 PM
thank you very much lovely Janis :)-luloo
Date: 8/15/2016 7:22:00 PM
Great Pantoum you are so good at this form, another well deserved win!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 5:13:00 PM
awww thanks so much John, you are a sweet man indeed :)-luloo
Date: 8/15/2016 5:53:00 PM
Lovely romantic write Laura...Congrats on your win
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 5:13:00 PM
many thanks Joseph :)-luloo
Date: 8/15/2016 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura, wonderful flow to the poem ! Hug Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 5:12:00 PM
thank you Eve for my placement I am so grateful :)-luloo
Date: 8/13/2016 6:09:00 AM
Lovely write on rainy romance:) A great opening line:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/13/2016 11:30:00 AM
thank you lovely Jo :)-luloo

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