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A Rainy Day Phantasmagoria

Translucent droplets descending aimlessly Thudding to the earth, exploding into fluidity Transcending in sync with any exterior element Condensing intensity with each thunderous blow Caressing the atmosphere with friction intensifying heat All the while, lubricating the possibilities of limitless evolution Plush carpet of primitive sod Seducing the blades of foliage budding with comers Embrace the earth in a manner of plow and grace Let Briar patches catch the droplets of reflective charges Let us flush our cheeks in the breeze of calm As we knead our nails into agil land We perspire in the moistness of the dew of creation The earth is its own composition And we as entities must coincide Because Vitality exist only within the rawness of us all

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Date: 7/13/2015 2:11:00 PM
This is all rather welcome! I enjoyed reading this poem. I had the feeling that here was someone who had thought about what they were writing and not just writing words. Very good! All the best! :) john
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Lauren Patton
Date: 2/12/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, kindly

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