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A Rainbow River

A Rainbow River My soft breath ripples with sun's glow, masking my pure blue into a rainbow river. Balveen Cheema December 9, 2015 Contest: Language Of Water Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Skat A

Date: 12/14/2015 9:40:00 PM

BALVEEN, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT**

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/13/2015 1:39:00 AM

Very deep and rich in talent. Congratulations ... CayCay

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/13/2015 2:02:00 AM

Thanks CayCay! You have made my day! Love...

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations Balveen.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/11/2015 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Nayda!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/10/2015 10:59:00 PM

Congrats on wonderful write n win Balveen!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/11/2015 2:54:00 AM

Thanks Upma!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2015 11:13:00 AM

This truly appeals to the senses, Balveen! lovely and serene....Congratulations on a worthy win:) Regards / paul

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/11/2015 2:56:00 AM

Thanks Paul! Regards...

James Inman

Date: 12/10/2015 8:13:00 AM

Wonderful the way the sunlight refracts on the water. Wonderful poem as well Balveen.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/10/2015 8:19:00 AM

Thanks for the minute observation which can make a whale of a difference, James! Regards.....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/10/2015 4:26:00 AM

you colored the view, balveeen..sweet congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/10/2015 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Nette! Enjoyed creating the transformation from blue to rainbow hues! Love.....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2015 4:20:00 PM

splendid!!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/9/2015 10:36:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/8/2015 6:23:00 AM

Illustrative, thank God for His creations. =`)~Olive ELoisa

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/9/2015 10:38:00 AM

Thanks Olive! Ah His beautiful creations!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/8/2015 3:52:00 AM

I'm not familiar with the form but I'm sure you have crafted it to perfection. Beautiful language and imagery! Well done Balveen!! Best wishes, Keith

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/8/2015 3:57:00 AM

That's a tetractys, Keith. Done it for the first time. Many thanks for your appreciation and good wishes! Regards......

Constance La France

Date: 12/7/2015 5:02:00 PM

Balveen, a very pretty poem, best of luck in the contest, a flowing 7 ~

Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/8/2015 3:49:00 AM

Thanks! Hope Nette, too, likes it as much! Love....