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A Quirky Romance

Work done we meet at home for treat we dine and eat get off our seats His hand on mine one on my spine we dance and glide spin round the side Heart beats so fast dance steps too rash we trip and fall down the long hall Right to the bed the rose is red come close the door take me I'm yours Turn out the light its way too bright dress stuck on head help or I'm dead His shirt is gone thinks he's Don Juan ate too much nuts sucks in his gut We play a tune that fills the room sighs, moans and groans rings from cell phone At last were spent bed skewed and bent our love a mess we rest in nest 1-30-18

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/15/2018 10:45:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Cheryl - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/16/2018 7:25:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Gregory; really appreciate it! Blessings to you too my friend~Che :)

John Gondolf

Date: 2/6/2018 4:56:00 AM

Cheryl, back to say congrats. John

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/16/2018 7:25:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit John; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/5/2018 8:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Cheryl ! Great rhymes and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve ~`*

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/5/2018 9:11:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit; glad you liked it Eve!~Che :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/5/2018 10:40:00 AM

Hi Cheryl, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/5/2018 8:46:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Alexis; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/4/2018 7:38:00 PM

Too funny, Cheryl! I enjoyed reading your poem! Delightfully written! Congrats on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/4/2018 7:55:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Sandra; glad you enjoyed it!~Che :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2018 7:36:00 PM

oh I LOVE that you inserted humor into yours. This was so delightful, Cheryl. Glad to see this today!! (oh and congrats for the win too)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/4/2018 7:41:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Andrea; glad you liked the humor!~Che :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/4/2018 6:26:00 PM

Very cute, Cheryl. Congrats on your winning poem.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/4/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind congrats and visit Line; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/4/2018 4:38:00 PM

Well done Cheryl. Great work. Regards Tom

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/4/2018 7:35:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and congrats Tom; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Silent One

Date: 2/4/2018 3:47:00 PM

Sounds really quirky lol.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/4/2018 7:35:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind quirky comment (lol) and for placing me as one of the winners S/O; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Pat Adams

Date: 2/2/2018 7:36:00 AM

This is really funny. Ate too much nuts in the middle is like what?? You always surprise me. Great rhyme as well.......pat

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/2/2018 8:06:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; thats what happens when I eat too many nuts lol!;0 Appreciate it!~Che :)

John Gondolf

Date: 2/1/2018 3:44:00 PM

Nicely done, Cheryl, I enjoyed reading. The line "bed skewed and bent"...really Cheryl...haha Best of luck. John

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/1/2018 8:19:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit John; glad you enjoyed it and appreciate the encouragement!~Che :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/1/2018 3:19:00 PM

Lol! Cheryl, I really enjoyed this humorous piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/1/2018 8:15:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Alexis; glad you enjoyed it! Appreciate the encouragement!~Che :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 2/1/2018 9:41:00 AM

Bahahaha! You are so funny!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/1/2018 8:14:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike; glad you got chuckle out of it! Appreciate it!~Che :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/31/2018 8:33:00 AM

LOL This was funny Cheryl. Well done :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/31/2018 8:44:00 AM

Glad you got chuckle out of it Heidi! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit; Appreciate it!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/31/2018 3:38:00 AM

Damn phone again, always goes off at the wrong time. Great rhyme Cheryl Regard Tom. PS.One thing that annoys me is your talking to someone and their phone rings and they say "must get this" egh, hang on, I'm talking grrrr. That's it rant over.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 1/31/2018 8:35:00 AM

Yes when you least expect it to lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; Appreciate your rant!~Che ;)