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A Quiet Voice

Caress With breathy voice Undress Your kiss Upon my mind Is bliss Take all Upon your bed I fall For Nette's Whispers of a Muse contest By Richard Lamoureux Written November 26th

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/8/2014 8:00:00 AM

Coming back to congratulate you, Richard! The most romantic breath on the list by far...thanks for your comments on my son's page. He is thrilled by the attention and I'm sure he'll be wanting to write more...have a blessed day. Hugs, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/8/2014 8:17:00 AM

It is so great to start writing young. It is good to cultivate expression of emotion from an early age.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/6/2014 11:37:00 PM

A fav Richard,congrats on the win...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2014 7:14:00 PM

wowowow, best romantic one i have seen yet. Congrats. I would have put this one in top three!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/4/2014 4:26:00 AM

Wonderful Richard! Congrats on fine win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2014 7:23:00 AM

Thanks Upma.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/3/2014 5:57:00 PM

I love this Richard! For me this is a fav. Congratulations on your win.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2014 7:24:00 AM

Thanks Maurice.

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/3/2014 3:10:00 PM

Very nice, Richard! Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2014 7:24:00 AM

Thankyou Sandra.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/3/2014 10:44:00 AM

Back with congratulations, Richard; a very deserved win! // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2014 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Paul, I appreciate you coming back.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2014 10:23:00 AM

passion with such distinction, rich... you delight..thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/3/2014 9:39:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Richard. I'm glad to see this on the winning list.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2014 7:27:00 AM

Thanks Brenda.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/3/2014 9:31:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2014 7:29:00 AM

Thanks Jan. hugs back to you.

Donna Jones

Date: 12/2/2014 8:05:00 AM

Wow....she'll love it..:-) ...nice!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2014 8:27:00 AM

I hope so Donna. Thanks.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/2/2014 6:35:00 AM

Once again you have created something magical with a new form!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2014 8:28:00 AM

;0) thanks Monterey.

Nirode Ray

Date: 11/28/2014 6:01:00 PM

I loved it. Great poetry!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2014 4:36:00 PM

Thanks Ray.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/28/2014 3:57:00 PM

I have to agree whole heartily, you nailed it! What a seductive write you have created!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2014 4:12:00 PM

Thanks again Arthur.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/28/2014 1:14:00 PM

you drew this with style richard excellent pen pal

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2014 4:12:00 PM

Thanks Liam.

Leon Enriquez

Date: 11/27/2014 4:46:00 PM

Dear Richard: Enjoyed this poem. There's definitely a touch of muse! All the best, Leon.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2014 4:18:00 PM

Thanks Leon.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2014 2:35:00 PM

Hmmm quite seductive, Richard! You've been raising the bar here! gl in contest. // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2014 4:19:00 PM

You are kind Paul.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/26/2014 7:22:00 PM

Wow, some passionate words! This is a difficult form...you have made it look easy, Richard. Have a blessed Thanksgiving...hugs, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/27/2014 7:18:00 AM

Thanks Rhonda. You as well, hugs Richard.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/26/2014 6:24:00 PM

Richard, "A quiet voice" good, :) eve 7 Have a wonderful Thanksgiving and a blessed day eve

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/27/2014 7:19:00 AM

Thanks Eve, much appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2014 6:18:00 PM

Its a VERY challenging form Richard - you have nailed it my friend - stunning write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/27/2014 7:20:00 AM

You are Kind Jan. hugs back.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/26/2014 1:25:00 PM

GRRRRRR.....I'm working on some, but...I'm not getting anywhere. It's harder than I thought. I LOVE this. My money is on you for this one, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2014 6:05:00 PM

It's hard to imagine that it would be difficult but it is.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/26/2014 1:21:00 PM

You captured a moment splendidly...Tim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2014 6:05:00 PM

Thanks Tim.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/26/2014 10:31:00 AM

Wow passion alive wid such few words Richard! It's not as simple as it seems to be I know! I don't hv a clue on this as yet! Gl in contest!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2014 6:08:00 PM

Thanks for the luck Upma.

David Meade

Date: 11/26/2014 10:00:00 AM

I am giving this to my wife -- right now!! Awesome job my friend --

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2014 10:02:00 AM

You made me smile, I'm glad you are putting it to good use *lol*.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/26/2014 9:49:00 AM

This seems perfect to me. I sat down to write thinking this was going to be simple..its not! Just beautiful. BG

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2014 10:03:00 AM

I struggled coming up with a Coherant conclusion. Thanks for the kind comment.