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A Quiet Peace

I lay on my bed with no sounds but the tick of the clock.. My mind wanders in and out over a life that Iv'e taken stock.. I breast stroke through day dreams of warmer days and cool nights.. Winter days are so short as the evening grabs the afternoon light.. Its easy to write with just a mind raining thoughts in quiet still time.. Every word written is poured from a hand that is mine.. "Breathe in the silence" contest

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Date: 1/22/2011 5:50:00 AM
silence has so much to give and for me it is TOO much and too often and sometimes "haunting" Light & Love My freind!
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:14:00 PM
Sometimes i drown my self in quietness,, and the ticking of time is the only thing i want to hear.. I love the way you grab the afternoon light.. and the way you pour your mind into your hand,..p.d.
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Date: 12/29/2010 8:30:00 AM
A few words to let you know I have read your poetry today and enjoyed it Michael. I hope to read many more of your poems in 2011. Wishing you a New Year filled with good health , love, and amazing inspiration. May your writing endeavors become all that you have wished for. HAPPY NEW YEAR. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2010 5:09:00 AM
Amazing... just when I think I have read the last amazing piece from u my W.K. u enthrall and thrill me with another and another... good luck in the contest... my computer was a little haywire yesterday and so much excitement still and this blizzard ..yuck... but 24 inches later we are still shoveling out..haha.. talk about spending quality time together.. and my sons gave me the good new the boo birds lost last night.. yeah... look for yahoo please.. Jersey Girl...luv..
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Date: 12/29/2010 2:30:00 AM
I need a quiet place lol.. Just kidding, love your entry Mr. F! All the best for Paula's contest with this stunning piece.. Love W
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Date: 12/28/2010 5:10:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..Is everything quieter in the snow clad land in which you are now living?..I know the few times that it snowed here to any depts there seemed to ge a different kind of quiet in the air..Your work reads like a winner to me..Your presence at my work made my eve lighter..Sara
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