A Quickie

Endless ocean, Life in motion, How to go through... There will be no trouble, If I ride on a bubble. Archana Garg 19/06/2014

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/4/2015 8:17:00 AM

A very very beautiful poem. Definitely a 7!

Robert Johnson

Date: 12/9/2014 8:02:00 AM

The trick they say, is to go your own way. Just don't suffocate in your own bubble. For if your 80 feet under and you burst and you blunder, your trouble is certain to double. :) Nice job Archana. Peace. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2014 8:57:00 PM

I REALLY really like yours. It is so short and sweet. Congrats. I would have put it in top three.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2014 1:38:00 AM

beautiful images - i am surrounding myself in my bubble at the moment! many congrats:-) hugs jan x

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/20/2014 9:00:00 AM

Make sure not to wear stiletto heals, you don't want to burst your own bubble.