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A Quickie

Beneath every breath a flower lingers Their sweet scent caught by vibrations from the fragile wings of butterflies As they float above the green meadow, in colored disguise, for all to see Fred Parker 6/18/14 contest.. A Quickie

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2014 9:00:00 PM

Congrats for the win. first one I see on butterflies. Very pretty.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2014 1:42:00 AM

a beautiful take on the theme - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/20/2014 6:09:00 AM

Skat has pictures of bubbles to look at , then asks write what you feel, this is what I felt

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2014 12:12:00 AM

this is really nice with pretty imagery. I am seeing some of these quickie poems with bubble theme and some without. I think I am confused but I am going to go to that contest page and read it again. I think I am not going to get a poem finished in time before it fills up.

Frederic Parker
Date: 6/20/2014 6:10:00 AM

read the reply above

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2014 12:10:00 AM

thanks so much for that sweet comment on my poem today. I do not really do that much for other people, just lots of poetry comments, it seems like. But I truly feel for the downtrodden. Let me see this poem of yours now.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/18/2014 6:54:00 PM

You had me at the title Frederic but the content kept me my friend

Frederic Parker
Date: 6/20/2014 6:11:00 AM

thank you Tim for your kindness