A Puff of Cigar

quit that smoke... even that coke... cause, if you got hook.. oh my!! take a look.. lungs will turn out black... As health be on bad luck... As problems starts to pact.. You'll need some bucks... Either remain or stay away... So you'll save another day... To live a little bit longer... Far from any trace of danger...

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James Fraser

Date: 10/13/2014 3:42:00 PM

It's a habit I've never touched as I found smoking to be simply disgusting. The sheer profit Tobacco Companies have made abhors me deeply. My father smoked and I hated it with a vengeance, James :)

Sean L Sanders

Date: 6/22/2013 4:12:00 AM

That's a a funny poem but true. Good job poet

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/22/2014 5:09:00 PM

hahaha thanks :) to God be the glory.. :) how bad i am i commented late.. :(