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A Puff

Clouds floating by in azure skies pushed here and there by fickle breezes playing tag and forming magical shapes as they dance in harmony across the skies Little puffs of white giving shelter from the blazing sun and uniting into towering pillions that appear to prop up great mansions and glittering silvery castles Streaked with enchanting reds, yellows and oranges with a little mauve tinge that soon purples as dusk slowly starts to fall cloaking them then behold the starry night as day now ends Now the clouds darken seemingly ominous as they obscure the moon from earthly sight with a back drop of glittering stars blanketing the skies at last the moon soars into view and peace returns once more

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Date: 8/6/2014 7:23:00 PM
a very descriptive one, Shadow. I loved the sound of that one line about the towering pillions. I don't think I ever saw that word before!! Nice one to read as I go off for the night!!
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Date: 8/6/2014 4:09:00 PM
I enjoyed your various pictures of clouds as they float through different times of day and night. Quite artistic! well done. // paul
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Date: 8/6/2014 11:09:00 AM
That's wonderful imagery Shadow! Awesome work !
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Date: 8/6/2014 10:37:00 AM
how picturesque can this get, shadow... wonderfully penned; i like this!.. huggs
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Date: 8/6/2014 9:36:00 AM
Nice picture you have drawn of the celestial bodies with fine imagery, shadow
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Date: 8/6/2014 8:44:00 AM
- Shadow, long time since I've seen you - Enjoy reading this beautiful poem! - A colorful and positive write - Thank you! - All the best to you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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