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A Proposal

Your on one knee I take a breath Its hard to breathe I know whats coming The little black velvet box And your pose says it all I love you You love me But I'm promised to another And you know him quite well Your brother I love him He loves me I'm in love with him As he is with me As I am with you But me and your brother Our love is...promised Our promise is old and true Our promise won't be broken So I avoid your question And walk away You fallow me As we walk To our secret place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/19/2010 9:07:00 PM
Good style of writing you posses!!!!!!! With words flying their meaning!!!!!! Vrushani!!!
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Date: 7/19/2010 8:26:00 PM
Well what ever the promise was, it was agood poem enjoyed, have anice one,..p.d.
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