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A Promise of Heaven

A sudden glimpse took me by wonder, when I saw a blink to those eyes. A little faith, a promise of forever, I still hold tight to kiss the sky. If tomorrow has plan not be cursed. I'll wipe away the pain we once had chased. Cos' I know by then you wouldn't leave me. We can share devotion 'til eternity. I once heard you swore in the night. Under the moonlit shadow our two hearts are blind. The wind has whispered that forever you're mine. Shared the warmth of our souls that unite. Too late,too long the hour has flicked. the doorway to heaven is barely wait. Will you be there waiting while I am on grief. Beside your tomb I promised to love you, my fate. ** 8th Place Winner In Kelly Deschler's Contest: HEART AND SOUL**

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Date: 10/9/2021 11:25:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem
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Date: 10/3/2021 5:56:00 AM
Just found this on the home page, what a pleasure.
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:23:00 PM
hi Aiyah, . Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 10:19:00 AM
another rockin' win, aiyah.. sweet congrats!... huggs
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/19/2014 1:20:00 PM
YeaH nette... i'm starting to believe my self... i can write!!! ^__^ thank you so much... you're the first person who inspired me to write.. ^__^
Date: 3/19/2014 1:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, aiyah
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/19/2014 8:32:00 AM
ThaNk YoU Dr. Ram... it's my pleasure to be part of this contest.. and my honor to have you here on my poem.. :'))
Date: 3/18/2014 10:10:00 PM
Another nice win Aiyah, you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/19/2014 8:44:00 AM
ThaNk yoU , SKAT ...!!! i'm so happy to see your freshest and youngest avatar on my poem today~.. :'O)) big hugs!!! ^__^
Date: 12/1/2013 9:39:00 AM
I love it,!! Aiyah! Different & Delightful!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/2/2013 10:18:00 AM
Thank you, Chuck :)
Date: 11/27/2013 12:50:00 PM
- A beautiful and sweet poem, AiyaH !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 11/28/2013 8:07:00 PM
thanks for the appreciation to my piece, Anne Lise :)

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