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A Promise In the Rain

And now they’re in the eye of recognition A promise of new love The two wrapped in a the act of transition Is it grand remembrance, perhaps when your love was the young? The passing of the hands the eyes, the tongue A state of expedition telling all there story All eyes rise in excitement, embarrassment, or anticipatory? Of what may come next Some look perplexed As the skies split the earth with precipitation Young lovers kiss without hesitation In a fanatic hold While the rain molds them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/3/2016 10:29:00 AM
Well said and craftily illustrated. A wonderful presentation of this wonderful site. Thumbs up and a definite 7
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Date: 10/1/2008 6:42:00 AM
Beautiful way to describe young love. Great imagery here and LOVE the title! Wonderful write! :) Cheers, Alana :)
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Date: 9/30/2008 11:45:00 PM
Laura - ahh the excitement of young love - the adventure of it all - And to frolic in the rain is just something to be treasured - God Bless
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Date: 9/29/2008 3:26:00 PM
Loved this beautiful piece of poetry you wrote. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
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Date: 9/29/2008 3:21:00 PM
I just love the sweet flowing imagery throughout this piece. The poem is so authentic and it took hold of me as I read and kept me captivated.
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Date: 9/29/2008 12:38:00 PM
Ah yes, the days when butterflies, blushing and giggles came all at once - sweet young love! Nothing in the world like it, sigh...lovely hun! Kristin
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Date: 9/29/2008 12:35:00 PM
Such a romantic read...like a scene from a movie. ~Lovely! ~Carrie
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Date: 9/29/2008 12:29:00 PM
Hello Girlfriend Laura! Ahhh, this takes my heart to places that once held promise when love was young and new. This will touch your young readers hearts with a sense of deep longing. So very beautiful!!! Pure joy to read....Love Light Truth Patricia
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