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A Process

........... Am I in love? .......................... I might - I think ................ ........ I think I am in love ................. And I think too much. .......... .... I think you might love me; ...... I think I should know better. .... .. I think I just love the idea of it. I think I love idealizing thoughts. . ...... I think we are beautiful when our thoughts are put together. ...... ......... I think we work at something beautiful without knowing. ......... ........... I think we take the challenge with smiles and sneers. ........... ................ I think sometimes I wish upon what is known. ................. .................. I relish those breezes that catch your hair. ................... .................... I can’t help but smile at all your gazes. ...................... ....................... I think knowing you is a process. ............................ .......................... I think love is just a process. ............................... .............................. I think I should know, .................................... ................................. I shouldn’t think, ......................................... ................................. “Should I think” .......................................... .................................... This I know. ............................................. ........................................ I think ................................................. ......................................... I am. ...................................................

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Date: 5/12/2010 12:05:00 PM
Very original and deep. Loved it.
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Date: 5/8/2010 8:11:00 AM
good point .. I think it's the lack of punctuation that throws it off, because it makes sense in my mind .. I'll have to edit it - thank you
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Date: 5/7/2010 4:37:00 AM
Nicely done. I really like the play on words and the variations and recycling of phrases. Although in the process of using the play on words, I think some of the phrases don't make that much sense, the last five lines are to what I am referring. I like it though, very clever, and the shapre is great!
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