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A Powerful Mist

A powerful mist Where skulls have all the power And skeletons are the primary Reason for swift death The undead sweeps up the night Opens the evening with fear Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2012 2:05:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem here about skulls and skeletons. Love the line about the undead sweeping up the night.

Rena Kiya

Date: 10/17/2012 9:12:00 AM

great imagry i like the "reason for swift death" very poetic 5stars you should read some of my postings we haved a simalir writing style

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/17/2012 5:09:00 AM

SKULL MAGIC REIGNS IN THESE EXCELLENT SCARY LINES OF HALLOWEEN DELIGHT TO IGNITE FIRES FOR HOLIDAY RUSSELL LUV .. AS TO MY CHAINED POEM .. NO PERSONAL EXPERIENCE OF ABUSE BUT A GOOD FRIEND OF MINE DID AND SHE PAID THE ULTIMATE PRICE LEAVING 4 CHILDREN MOTHERLESS DUE TO BEATINGS FROM HER HUSBAND .. SO SAD .. THANKXXX FOR YOUR STIRRING OBSERVATIONS MY FRIEND ..