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A Positive Poem

wide eyed kids sprint home parents scrounging for some change… ice cream truck music -24 Jun 2014- “A Positive Poem Contest”

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Date: 7/23/2014 6:27:00 PM

I sure remember those days. GOOD one!!

Date: 6/30/2014 4:35:00 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara Brought a smile....

Date: 6/28/2014 7:47:00 PM

Oh that is great!! that sure is positive and enjoyable, grats on first!

Date: 6/28/2014 3:26:00 PM

Hi David, this is such a clever write that I enjoyed reading! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win!

Date: 6/28/2014 1:25:00 PM

Love this!!.. Congrats on a great win, David.. Hugs.. Arlene

Date: 6/28/2014 9:59:00 AM

Hahah, nice humor flowing like ice cream, david

Date: 6/28/2014 7:45:00 AM

Beauty in thoughts ,, positive attitude in ur poem is amazing David ! Congrats on top place!

Date: 6/28/2014 4:30:00 AM

David, nice and very innocently positive. Congrats for the win. Mohan

Date: 6/24/2014 7:42:00 PM

My favorite poem of the day! So true of life..Ive done the scrounging many times. BG