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A Positive Poem

The sun has risen in the east Morning's light has struck the dark Black has turned as gray increased The sun has risen in the east The strength of night has now decreased And light of day will now embark The sun has risen in the east Morning's light has struck the dark contest A Positive Poem 6/22/14

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Date: 6/30/2014 4:36:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
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Date: 6/28/2014 7:41:00 PM
I like that, the morning's light has struck the dark, well done Frederic and grats on a winning poem :)
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Date: 6/28/2014 1:23:00 PM
love morning's light striking the dark.. Congrats on a great win, Frederic.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/28/2014 2:16:00 PM
thank you Arlene,a new friend I hope, and thank you for your kindness
Date: 6/28/2014 12:12:00 PM
- 1 place!! - CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!! - Wish you a great weekend, Frederic. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/28/2014 2:14:00 PM
and you too have a great weekend my gentle friend
Date: 6/28/2014 9:58:00 AM
Wonderful poem with the form of my choice Troilet,frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/28/2014 2:13:00 PM
thank you Dr Ram for your kind response
Date: 6/28/2014 9:53:00 AM
Big congrats on your win!!!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/28/2014 2:12:00 PM
thank you Robert for your kind response
Date: 6/28/2014 8:50:00 AM
Very wonderful positivity here Frederic ! Congrats on huge win !
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/28/2014 2:12:00 PM
Thank you Dr Upma for your kind response
Date: 6/23/2014 2:43:00 AM
- Yes, a positive and beautiful poem Frederic! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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