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A Positive Poem

crystal waters line the shore festive as love potion’s dew gushing words echo birds’ call-- like cool serenade mounds of earth-clay warm nighttime’s ride through sand castles as bubbles fly with lip-talks-- dash of rendezvous Contest by Elly Waterouse A Positive Poem June 21, 2014

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Date: 6/30/2014 4:37:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
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Date: 6/29/2014 4:28:00 PM
you certainly rocked this one, rhoma... more power to you and big congrats with huggs
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Date: 6/28/2014 7:43:00 PM
Love the line "festive as love potions dew" great job writing a winning poem :)
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Date: 6/28/2014 3:23:00 PM
Hi Rhoma, this is such a beautiful write with wonderful imagery! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win!
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Date: 6/28/2014 1:20:00 PM
beautiful, Rhoma... congrats on a great win.. hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/28/2014 9:56:00 AM
It's a nice song on the positiveness in life, congrats, Rhoma
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Date: 6/28/2014 8:47:00 AM
Great one Rhoma ! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 6/28/2014 4:25:00 AM
A beautiful poem RHOMA, on the positivity gerated by the elements on the shore. Congrats for the win. Mohan
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