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A Positive Poem

Seven/seven, my birthday, my family will fete me. No need for costly gifts, they bring loving hearts. Memories will be renewed, many old stories retold. Praises will be heaped on me, their love, all I need. 6/21/14 Written for "A Positive Contest"

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Date: 6/30/2014 4:24:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
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Date: 6/30/2014 2:19:00 PM
We all need such love. A great read.
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Date: 6/30/2014 2:39:00 AM
You are blessed in so many ways, Joyce. Many congrats win with this exceptional Doditsu. Your friend in poetry, Elaine
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Date: 6/28/2014 12:51:00 PM
Lucky sevens, Joyce!! I believe I had an old boyfriend with that birth date! My hubbie's is July 1. Have a GREAT birthday and I see this was a winner, so congratulations to you.
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Date: 6/28/2014 5:15:00 AM
A positive expectation, Joyce, Many happy returns of the day in advance and congrats for the win. Mohan
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Date: 6/28/2014 4:40:00 AM
love is all we need very true. congrats
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Date: 6/27/2014 8:59:00 PM
Joyce, happy birthday early. Enjoyed reading this positive poem. Verlena :0).
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Date: 6/25/2014 5:08:00 PM
awww, what a beautiful write, dear Joyce - so glad your birthday will be such a wonderful celebration
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Date: 6/23/2014 1:45:00 PM
Dear Joyce, you deserve all of the praises your family and friends will bestow. Wish I could celebrate your special day with you. A very uplifting poem that is perfect for the contest. And you know I'm always wishing you success in every endeavor. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 6/21/2014 4:24:00 PM
Ohh, cute! Happy birthday. It's coming soon :)
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Date: 6/21/2014 1:11:00 PM
That is positive! Sounds like a wonderful time. The older we get, the less "crap" we need. Enjoyed your poem. BG
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