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A Positive Poem

She sought a mate for one date; he arrived with a suitcase. She quickly gave him the boot for he had no shoes. Another man brought his van filled with all his belongings. She didn’t know what to think; he said he lived there. She gave cash to these homeless, then changed her online profile. “Wanted: Man with his own means; I’ve donated mine.” *Written June 16, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/26/2014 9:42:00 PM
Carolyn So humorous and entertaining. Made me smile with entertaining joy. Thank you for the nice comment on my Paradise poem
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Date: 6/30/2014 4:30:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
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Date: 6/28/2014 8:06:00 PM
Clever write girl, grats on the win, thanks for the smile
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Date: 6/28/2014 6:54:00 PM
It is meaningful and witty, Carolyn, congrats!
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Date: 6/28/2014 1:58:00 PM
Wow! Carolyn, how original! Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/28/2014 11:15:00 AM
Real n huge positivity !! Kept me euphoric for quite a long dear ,, laughs r healthy! Congrats Carolyn on huge win !
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/28/2014 2:30:00 PM
This actually happened! It was long ago, but I'd still give him the "boot" today. Thanks for your comments, dear. If I can make someone laugh, I get a wonderful feeling.
Date: 6/28/2014 10:09:00 AM
I laughed and laughed and others looked at me with amazement, Congrats on the win, Carolyn
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Date: 6/28/2014 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine write and your win!!!!
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Date: 6/28/2014 4:58:00 AM
Carolyn, congrats for your win. Mohan
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:07:00 PM
this is a humorous one, Carolyn. Great way to do her contest. Unique for the theme!
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Date: 6/18/2014 9:55:00 AM
Ha ha, good one!
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Date: 6/16/2014 11:10:00 PM
You are teasing me, I have a suitcase and a van, now I have absolutely no plan!!!
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Date: 6/16/2014 8:51:00 PM
Very funny anecdotes, enjoyed to the full, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2014 6:39:00 PM
Too clever are you! Smart woman who knows when to give the old Heave-Ho !!
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