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A Porno-Graphical Slamming Rebuttal

Seems like I could be on top of the world. I think about poetry like my tongue is pearled. Just the other day I wrote a poem to honor another poet. I spun around in a spin to unfurl to the Soupers whorled. I know they think they’re the bombshell. They are big headed and believe their words cast the spell. They vortex puts us in a whirlpool. They billow swells. Soupers let’s keep it real. The universe zeal. We entertain each other with our thoughts. Poetry is our appeal. We write to regale. Anything else considered is to no avail. I laugh aloud. Soupers the advantage is a tall tale. I am here to share-out. That there is such a thing as an amateur in the house. I know many fill the title of a poet professional. This is where real skills are grandeur and profound. Soupers, the truth expose. A writer’s right shows. Angstrom to a wavelength, the brain thinks and the mind depicts. As a Poetess, here I throw it to the wind; that it is you with the *******. To the Souper who asked for a rebuttal to his slam. __________________________________________________________________| Penned February 18, 2015!

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Date: 3/29/2015 10:24:00 PM
Verlena, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:40:00 PM
VERLENA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/23/2015 4:47:00 PM
Thanks PD. Verlena
Date: 2/23/2015 11:47:00 AM
A very entertaining slam. A belated congrats on POTD!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/23/2015 3:41:00 PM
Thanks Richard for your belated congratulation. Verlena
Date: 2/20/2015 9:14:00 PM
Great slam, Verlena! I can tell you had a lot of fun writing this one...Congrats on TPOD and big hugs, Rhonda
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/20/2015 9:17:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda for congratulations. Verlena
Date: 2/20/2015 11:53:00 AM
Wham - bam I really loved this slam. Congrats on POTD.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/20/2015 12:20:00 PM
Thanks! Verlena
Date: 2/20/2015 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Writers write to let their true concerning emotions out, just because they don't have the skills of words doesn't mean they don't feel the emotions in their hearts. They are still poets in my heart. Blessings eve
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/20/2015 12:22:00 PM
True true! Real real! Thanks for words that are so encouraging! Verlena
Date: 2/20/2015 8:43:00 AM
Dropping back to say congrats on poem of the day Verlena:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/20/2015 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Jan for the congratulations! Verlena
Date: 2/20/2015 5:52:00 AM
Good one Verlena. Love the ending. Congratulations on POTD
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/20/2015 12:24:00 PM
Thanks Janet! Verlena:
Date: 2/20/2015 5:32:00 AM
Good one, Verlena. Slamming can be fun. I liked the ENDING! ;) Congrats on POTD
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/20/2015 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Eileen! Verlena
Date: 2/18/2015 9:28:00 PM
Awesome slam thank you for joining in the fun and giving us all a good perspective. Ty also for exposing me to you rebuttle lolz. Awesome title I loved your slam.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/18/2015 9:38:00 PM
Thanks Nathan for the opportunity to have some creative fun. I've enjoyed writing this rebuttal. Verlena
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Nathan D.
Date: 2/18/2015 9:34:00 PM
P.S since I already punned i have to say I like the end the best
Date: 2/18/2015 9:20:00 PM
Another amateur in the house, Verlena. Way to go, girl! It's nice to be exposed to Poetry Slam, right when and where it's happening. Smiles and hugs from the land of thousand isles. :D Kim
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/18/2015 9:24:00 PM
Thanks Kim for your support in this Poetry Slam... Verlena
Date: 2/18/2015 8:13:00 PM
Amateur in the house. Verlena, I like the way you expose a hermits band against the best. Luv ~SKAT~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/18/2015 8:48:00 PM
Thanks Skat for your luv and support... Verlena
Date: 2/18/2015 7:31:00 PM
Great slam Verlena - I am a learning so much on my poetic journey - I am definitely an enthusiastic amateur here:-) Love the power in this write and the final two lines - awesome:-) Hugs jan xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/18/2015 8:49:00 PM
Thanks Jan for your hugs and supportive remarks. Verlena

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