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A Porcelain Statue

Porcelain statue A girl with a goose She has food hidden Treat in a small sack A teasing gesture It reminds me Of you with goose A gift maybe The perfect gift. Maybe gift Purchased now Tucked away For a Special Time Sponsor: Nathan A Contest: Precious Moments The Figurine

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Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 1/31/2013 4:03:00 PM

Sara congrats on your win. A sweet write indeed. Warm Smiles, Connie

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/31/2013 10:10:00 AM

Sara, lovely and delicately precious...wonderful concept....congrats on your win.... am new to this form...

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/31/2013 9:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sara!! Well done. Big hugs. Live ya. Deb

Joseph May

Date: 1/31/2013 4:48:00 AM

congrats on a great win Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2013 9:08:00 PM

Sara.. Congratulations in Nathans, precious moment contest...xox~PD

Nathan D.

Date: 1/30/2013 8:01:00 PM

Sara, thanks for the Precious poem' Nate

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/28/2013 7:07:00 PM

Well I like this Hexaverse ,, thank you for reading Angel.

Len Gasun

Date: 1/27/2013 1:50:00 AM

So beautiful poem both in form and image. A perfect and precious gift I suppose. I love your poem and thank you so much for sharing! love and big hugs, Leonora

Don Johnson

Date: 1/26/2013 10:10:00 PM

the loose goose do choose, a gift perhaps a smile, also like the words pursued. sweet happines for you chile....

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/26/2013 5:26:00 PM

This is an awesome and delightful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, Great Work! I missed this poem early this morning, but I found it! Glad I did, this was an excellent poem of a Precious Moments Figurine!

Jack Horne

Date: 1/26/2013 3:23:00 PM

love this, Sara - congrats on your wins, my friend. It's just spinning a lot again tonight - having trouble posting comments at times

Christy Burns

Date: 1/26/2013 2:03:00 PM

Your word useage flows perfectly. Great write in which I thank you for the reminder of my fondest childhood collectables :)..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/26/2013 1:00:00 PM

Do not break the fine porcelain statue, wipe gently dust off of it. - Beautiful! - Good luck in the contest Sara. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2013 8:54:00 AM

I like this way you chose to showcase your figurine. Great poetry form, Sara.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2013 6:57:00 AM

Good morning Sara... a precious moment to mock. Nice statue figuring. Good luck in Nathan's contest. Love .pd