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A Poets Cold Dark Heart

Soupers say my pen radiates an icy chill. My words are able to freeze hell's fiery gates, which gives me such a thrill! February's cold gusty wind, is no match for my cold hearted pen. Some poets may not comprehend, but I metamorphosed from my wintry sin! My stanzas are arctic and raw, nipping at any poet who dares. I try and leave my reader in awe, with eyes that surprise the coldest stares! I'm always roaming the icy land, looking for a poet to slay. With a poetic tribal headband, I dominate with my chilling word play!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/20/2011 3:19:00 PM
Another nice descriptive write with good rhyming. In the first line of the second verse, the word "artic" is correctly spelled "arctic". Everything else is great.
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:28:00 PM
Excellent work, JAM Your dark writes are always intriguing..scary at times, but this is milder than most. I enjoyed this. Love, PB
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:29:00 PM
quite chilling are these poetic words!...love,Deb
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:43:00 AM
Bravo!!! Yes you are an amzing Poet.. I enjoy your thought and view's of life that you share... Very good my friend......Michael
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