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A Poetry Soup Breakup

I fell in love with a poet on this site but lately something just hasn't been right. It's time to bring this silly game to an end. so you can have that other man for a boyfriend! Damn it hurts, but now I must walk away. I was a fool to be called your fiance. I won't curse, just a poem to say I'm through. And with this verse, I'm saying, "No more me and you!" I know you like "couplets," should I say your name? My first love, what was I thinking of: I'll never be the same! Enjoy that other guy, and that move to another state. I refuse to cry, and on your face, I wish I could defecate!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/9/2011 12:42:00 PM
Feeling your pain,JAM. Can't say I appreciate your way of expressing the hurt she may have caused. Sometimes it pays to go back and see what caused the problem before you get angry. Try to forgive her like you would like to be forgiven too! Peace and love, Annalise
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Date: 4/8/2011 12:09:00 PM
glad this was'nt in person !
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