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A Poetic Mess

( On the eternal non-sequitur of Prose Poetry ) The mess on the passenger side floor of my dodge van is prose... or poetry? The battle rages! Are we dialectical heirs, or hairs? "The cross or the cross hairs". Carrol said that. "He was awake a long time before he remembered his heart was broken". That's Hemingway. "A rose by any other name". Shakespeare, of course. A poetic work in the making... A poetic mess! Of all, only the half-drunk bottle of Merlot taunts me to exhume it. The rest are content to be casts off of a crippled civility, becoming themselves reminders, of the broken heart that names them. As for me, I smoke life-shortening cigarettes in the sun-damaged van, drink blasts of black Merlot in the shadows hush, and somewhere, in the midst of these confusing conspiracies, value oscillates- a shame-faced moon wanes. Some draw to the light. Others, the flame!

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Date: 9/21/2021 9:13:00 AM
and the flame burns on.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 10/7/2021 12:46:00 PM
But not without 'the light'. That's the problem with "Dualism" ~ all that don't fit so neatly within contestation
Date: 4/23/2021 10:24:00 AM
"Some draw to the light. Others, the flame!" - this is excellent! Reminds me of "...to be a woman in love with a man in search of the flame." Jackson Browne - "You Love the Thunder"
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Robert Warlov
Date: 4/28/2021 4:05:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 6/3/2017 8:12:00 PM
It may have started out messy but it led up to a fantastic finale. The last two verses of this are amazing.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 6/4/2017 5:19:00 PM
Coming from you, that really is "high-praise". Like the battle about prose-poetry, the valuable stuff in life can get lost too. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 5/15/2017 3:12:00 PM
Well done I enjoyed to read it. There lots of thoughts were running through my mind. Nice to meet you Robert.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 5/23/2017 11:11:00 AM
thanks. sorry about late reply

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