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A Poem To Time

Lately time has been very upsetting, with all its straight forwardness. Happening when I am not aware day after day dragging me forward, dropping Loss like its nobody's business weaving my past like a secret spider, in the dark hours of the night. Silvery strands, wet with tears for what was, tangling all my tommorows. Time, with its linear inevitability, as we tightrope to our futures what other choice is there? My life is your consequence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/11/2009 4:44:00 AM
My life is your consequence and so are my tears--well penned--so deep and touching-charma
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Date: 8/8/2009 2:21:00 AM
Cleverly written work. It has truth that needs to be said. Ours lives are not contained unto ourselves but reach out as a sound wave or the wave from a dropped stone. Sara
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Date: 8/6/2009 12:28:00 PM
excellent write...most excellent! Light & Love
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:24:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and will be back to read more of it soon Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2009 6:18:00 AM
This feels as if you wrote it from a heart beating in fast motion.....hoping for a peaceful solution. Well done!
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