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A Poem of Myself

I lost my innocence in the Dance, of teenage romance. I was sharpened by the stone of youthful rebellion. I was the only tried and true rebel. I had this aching in my heart since the first night I sinned. I got the words of poets in my bones, and it shapes my tone. It's five hundred college exams. It's five hundred sleepless nights. It's one thousand reasons why I should have tried. I would sing the blues to the dogs. To the ones left too long in the rain. To the ones that know nothing but pain. My body is broken and my words are soft spoken. My mind is a pit filled with spiders. My soul is the deepest and darkest hole. With the heart of an artist and the mind of a scientist, I experiment with my passions. 9/24/15

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Date: 6/22/2016 8:40:00 AM
great poem
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Date: 5/29/2016 12:58:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Angel. :)
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Date: 5/26/2016 3:30:00 AM
Angel, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/24/2016 1:42:00 PM
Good going on this poem of yourself, Angel, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Angel Garcia
Date: 5/24/2016 3:12:00 PM
Thanks, I really appreciate that. I look forward to reading your work and those of others I come across.

Book: Shattered Sighs