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A Poem For Someone I Want

Just sitting here, listening to you Smoke a cigarette. Inhaling so softly, and in that Moment I wished I was the air That surrounded you. I wanted to be breathed inside of You, and become the very veins That caress your lungs. A cigarette had ever been so Lovely, until it had become that Very cigarette held between your lips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/29/2016 11:14:00 AM
This was beautiful, I love how you did this. Wow, you have created an amazing poem out of ordinary things, which is so very cool.
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Date: 11/29/2016 11:03:00 AM
Reading this poem is like being wrapped in the finest silk robe. Cheers, Tricia. --Doug
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