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A Place To Belong

Searching for a place to belong Trying so hard to fit in To be what everyone else Wants her to be That she loses herself Alone at night She cries herself to sleep Feeling so lost and alone Misunderstood She slices her skin Just to watch it bleed The pain is the only thing That reminds her she is alive Eyes haunted and desolate She walks through life Like a ghost long dead Invisible And forever unnoticed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/25/2013 10:46:00 AM
Good write enjoyed.
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Raven Silverwolf
Date: 4/25/2013 1:01:00 PM
thank you. God bless.
Date: 2/12/2009 6:57:00 PM
Raven, please never think of yourself as alone. God is always with you and your beautiful but sad poem will certainly reduce your fears of being "forever unnoticed."
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Raven Silverwolf
Date: 4/25/2013 1:01:00 PM
Thank you for your touching comment. Since giving my life to Christ I have never felt that way again. :) God bless you.
Date: 1/30/2009 7:58:00 PM
There is no worse feeling than invisibility... when you have contact with nobody, including yourself. Well done Raven! God bless, Keith
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Raven Silverwolf
Date: 4/25/2013 1:00:00 PM
Thank you and God bless

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