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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Italian or Petrachan
Inspired: 2024 April 06
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#9: Days of Paper Roses Do the numbers--dogs don't count--just survives! Then everything, be as close enough, still, of this and that, thoughts begin and end, thrives, truth betold, none were measured boundless will. There's a bold statement, typed on front pages, rolled off the presses, just to impress us, splashed inklings midst papered, of such phrases, ... rolled and impressed, settles the dust--minus. High-topped towers, the light of day, shadows, thought-filled days, wages paid by subscribers, of The Times, Gazettes, or Tribune Heralds, flighters, fighters, there too were paid--writers. Dawn paper rolls, notepads ... night closes, they blossomed they did like rows of roses.

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Date: 4/6/2024 3:54:00 PM
as I read your poem, I imagined I was a journalist anxiously waiting for the newspaper to come off the presses. The title is subtly perfect given the message of your poem. have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 4/6/2024 4:07:00 PM
Agreed, it's a nailer for Hearst's--types, coffin, --then it'll be the dot.com's turn, hm. Poignant, though elementary as anything afforded life, even if they'd be via human touches--their demise is certain, thanks, Sara. Aloha, William

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