A Place Not Meant To Be: 04

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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Italian or Petrachan

Inspired: 2024 February 08

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#4: Time Always Minute Time, inspired, now expired, on-site, sit tight. all that stands subject to change constantly, from one crossroads to milestone, overwrite, the turning point, grains of sand, presently, exchanging circumstances pertinent, time-space continuum, situations, time-slot columns, sectional, alignment, segments prepare a course of durations, stages invent themselves accordingly, time and again they reinvent the wholes, tis uncompromising strengths ... primary, repeat performance, seconds intervals, full showcase entertains a split instant, shifting affects all their pulled souls; constant.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/8/2024 5:51:00 AM

the rate of change is so fast that it's hard to witness and experience...your poem seem to capture that unstable almost chaotic feeling given the string of words seemingly read at a fast pace. Interesting and creative.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/8/2024 6:20:00 AM

The intervals of time change is instantaneous. Liken the sands in the hourglass, the grain of sand falling is different from the grain that fell before it, and is different from the grain that is falling behind it. Every second creates a different set of circumstances. THANK you so much, Sara. Aloha, William