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A Place Long Ago

There was a place, years long ago, a lush green oak and flowered vine. You took my hand, we lay below searching clouds for faces to find. But didn't see time's restless flow slip into our strawberry wine. January 11, 2023 for Line Gauthier's Bite Size Contest No.59

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Date: 1/14/2023 9:47:00 AM
Anne, Think this made all of remember a time! Your words also made one realize there can be a repeat of that time, Thx again for your thoughts, suzanne
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/16/2023 3:44:00 PM
Thanks, Suzanne!
Date: 1/13/2023 8:21:00 PM
A beautiful poem Ann. Both lovely and a little sad too. Hugs Anne :-)
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/13/2023 10:02:00 PM
Thanks for hearing what I was saying. And, yes sad.
Date: 1/12/2023 6:56:00 AM
Good memories are the best. I love to find things in the clouds. Have a blessed day.........
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/12/2023 10:24:00 AM
Thank you, dear Paula.
Date: 1/11/2023 9:19:00 PM
Lovely yet sad Ann ….l love poems of relection…Debx
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/12/2023 10:22:00 AM
Thanks, Debx. Oh, I love them, too! Life has so many.
Date: 1/11/2023 7:20:00 PM
Sweet, bittersweet, -- love the blend of nostalgia, Ann. Nicely done! :) gw
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/12/2023 10:23:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon. Life seems full of bittersweet moments.

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