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A Place In the Sun

Crouched down low, her crumpled frame admits defeat awash with shame "My child," He calls through murky dark her ear inclined she feels a spark "Lift up your eyes" and so she gazes heavenward in tiny phases trembling in fear paralyzed by sin the girl decides to tilt back her chin "I LOVE YOU" He cheers in streams of warm light bathed in its rays the sun dissolves the night a freed girl dances in a field of flowers no longer bound by her darkest hours

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/26/2016 7:18:00 PM
Emily, nice to see this one again. skat
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:45:00 PM
- A warm welcome to the P Soup, Emily :) - Hope it will come many more poems from you in the future - Enjoy reading your first, a very well written poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2015 8:52:00 AM
This is lovely Emily. I like the contrast between the darkness at the start and the freedom at the end.
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Date: 1/25/2015 12:28:00 AM
Hi Emily, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/24/2015 11:50:00 PM
Emily , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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