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Imagine, if you can, that I were a cloud I would wear a new crown, of silver display a shining example of grace over shrouds I would drift past the sun, with no fear of the crowd I would treasure the world from a new point of view Astonished to see how vast and how blue With the rush of wind, that brushes my face I would hear every bird, feel every embrace While God with His arms, surrounds me in love I'd belong to a place in the sky, far above I wouldn't drift all alone, but have new inner peace I would open my heart and dream of new things The earth could be peaceful, as never before Where confidence reigned along every shore Above, me the sun would be ever warm The world would resolve all the hurts of the day I would weave a new song, lean into His arms and sail to the music, straight out of the gray Feeling God and His presence, like soft wings of a dove From my place in the sunlight, that is shining with love
________________________________________________________________ Gail's Contest: A Place In The Sun 1/20/15

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Date: 1/25/2015 10:18:00 AM
Carrie, your poem is incredible and outstanding, best of luck in the contest, I want to enter this contest also and you have truly inspired me and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 1/21/2015 11:06:00 AM
Inspirational expressions of eternity, Carrie
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Date: 1/21/2015 10:24:00 AM
Lovely Godly Carrie. Thanks.
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Date: 1/21/2015 9:02:00 AM
Such a pastoral write dear poet, such embrace ! Lovely poetry Carrie, and so nice to read you again...always a pleasure ! Have a blessed day.....much love, james
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Date: 1/21/2015 12:37:00 AM
A well written poem... nice flow of words... best wishes for the contest... nad+
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Date: 1/20/2015 11:34:00 PM
So light and beautiful.... I imagined I was in the clouds...hugs Tim
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