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A Place In the Sun

A Place in the Sun I could run all day, but you would still be with me. You guide me to the Golden Gate since you are the key. You block the enemy’s harmful tricks. As he tries to steal all of your picks. Please keep me calm and help me trust in you. Even though I don’t understand all that you do. Why am I still running when I have already won? Through you I have found my place in the Son.

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Skat A

Date: 1/24/2015 6:53:00 AM

DaChardae, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2015 7:18:00 AM

- A warm welcome to the P- Soup, DaChardae - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first poem! - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2015 9:01:00 PM

DaChardae, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@