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A Place In My Mind

A little quiet hill Sitting very still With a modest pride Slanted curve aside. Every tree's tappered stems Adorned starry diadems Glistening dew of morn The dawn of a day born. Sweetly they slept While then there wept The fallen leaves To which silence heaves. The crystal air to skim The rough edges within And the leafy shelves Refresh themselves. Round the rocky bends The soft morning winds Through blades of grass And time's shadow to pass Against endless streams Of sunny beams. How they wrestle And ever nestled O're the pebbly sand Across the majestic land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/9/2015 8:46:00 PM
Hi Laura, Congratulations ~LINDA~
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Laura Hurst
Date: 5/10/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thank you! How do I check the status of the contest I entered?
Date: 5/9/2015 5:42:00 PM
laura, congratulations in the Knight Writer's Club contest. SKAT :)
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Laura Hurst
Date: 5/10/2015 7:06:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 4/27/2015 9:31:00 AM
I always say that one one is either a poet or not - there's no middle ground. You are a tremendously endowed versifier. You have your deserved 7++++ and my entire respect...
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Laura Hurst
Date: 5/10/2015 7:08:00 PM
I'm so sorry that I have not yet thanked you for your kind words... Thank your so much no better praise than that! I look forward to reading your work aa well!
Date: 4/26/2015 10:25:00 PM
Laura, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Laura Hurst
Date: 4/28/2015 4:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind words. I would enjoy a new friend in you. I'll message you.
Date: 4/26/2015 2:19:00 PM
Laura, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Laura Hurst
Date: 4/26/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thank you so much I've enjoyed my time here so far!
Date: 4/26/2015 12:56:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Laura :) - Welcome to P- Soup, looking forward to more poems from you in the future - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Hurst
Date: 4/26/2015 9:29:00 PM
Thanks I am looking forward to reading yours too!
Date: 4/26/2015 10:54:00 AM
This is cute and smooth. Welcome to poetry and I hope you soon be a souper star
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Laura Hurst
Date: 5/10/2015 7:12:00 PM
Thank you very much. I look forward to reading your poetry as well!

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