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A Pierced Heart

I've heard the tales of all the pain, Of birthing a child, raising him. I have to ask, "What's that again? I don't remember any pain. I don't recall what went before They brought my baby through the door. They laid him there, right by my breast. All loving mothers know the rest. All thoughts of pain just went away, The wonder I still feel today Of holding him, my new born son, In every way, a perfect one. Upon a cloud, not narrow bed, My hand caressed his downy head. "What's that you say? You ask again? I don't remember any pain. The years went by, too fast for me, His first birthday, then two and three. And then the years together ran. Before I knew he was a man. He chose the work he loved to do, He married and raised children too. I'd like to have small son again, But child or man caused me no pain. And now they say my son is gone I must find way to carry on. You ask that question once again? Yes oh yes, now I know of pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/18/2015 2:13:00 PM
Ms Johnson: I'm a newbie with little experience in "real" writing but I believe I could actually "feel" the emotion gushing from your pen as you wrote those lovely words from start to finish. Thank you for sharing with all of us, your heart. oldbuck
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Date: 3/9/2015 11:20:00 PM
Sigh, Congrats!
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Date: 3/8/2015 1:36:00 PM
Love can not be granted it must be experienced and there are no easy answers or short cuts past the pain that its passing may leave in its wake. Your work confronts life and faith in its totality and comes up a winner, suppling a subtle wisdom that is gently distributed throughout. The words are gentle and the hurt is real...leaving a feeling of calm acceptance. Emile #7+++
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Date: 3/8/2015 12:22:00 PM
Joyce, Congratulations, A nice "Pierced" win. Love LINDA **
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Date: 3/7/2015 6:34:00 PM
I cant imagine...I am so touched by your poem. Congrats. BG
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Date: 3/7/2015 5:30:00 PM
Between you poem and Becca's poem I am so very moved. A well deserved win!
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Date: 3/7/2015 7:00:00 AM
Heartbreaking..but well told..now I know of pain. Great write. Congratulations Joyce...rajat
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:32:00 PM
Joyce, congratulations on your win for this heart-wrenching poem...your image of forgetting joyful pain and now knowing and feeling sorrowful pain stabbed at my heart. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:48:00 PM
Simply heart breaking it brought tears to my eyes - our friends lost thert 2 boys in December aged 19 and 20 - I cannot begin to imagine the pain of losing a child:-( many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2015 10:09:00 AM
Losing a child is the hardest thing a mother will ever have to face. My prayer is that you may have an extra measure of God's blessings and peace.
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Date: 3/2/2015 1:42:00 PM
Dear Joyce, You've brought tears to my eyes with this loving tribute to your son. Although I have no children, people tell me they forget the pain that birth entails as soon as they hold their babies. The hardest pain to bear is said to be losing a child. God bless you, Hon. Sending you big hugs. Love, carolyn
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Date: 2/28/2015 5:18:00 PM
Such a sad ending..Enjoyed reading this one..Reads like winning material if for a contest..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 2/28/2015 6:33:00 AM
Joyce, what a painful and emotional write, I feel the deep hurt that still burns in your poem so beautifully laying open your heart in words, 'and this is love' and thank you for visiting my poem, oh Spring . . .
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Date: 2/26/2015 4:25:00 AM
so heart wrenching Joyce I feel your loss deeply it is one of the worst things that can happen to a mother I pray you will find some comfort in your memories big hugs dear friend 7
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