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A Piece of Me

So you want a piece of me Well here I am, take it Think you know me so well Then why treat me like **it. There are not many pieces left You better take yours now If you dare to take it If not I’ll show you how. Time and time you goad me Time and again I fold Well not this time pal Take all the pieces you can hold. When you have the pieces Build them back up to find me Then see what you have lost When you take that piece from me. © 13/03/2013 Contest Entry A work of fiction

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Harry Horsman

Date: 3/17/2013 6:15:00 AM

you really know how to dig deep, with in one's sentiments, this poem, could reflex on the whole world as it is now, although personified, you truly do touch on the way life is today!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/17/2013 6:20:00 AM

Hi there harry thanks for another smashing comment form you I do miss you around xx

John Posey

Date: 3/14/2013 5:22:00 PM

How can one not recognize this as a winner..... Magnificently done...... Jake

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/16/2013 4:10:00 AM

Thank you John I appreciate your lovely comment xx

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/13/2013 11:36:00 PM

Painful and deep. Awesome Mandy.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/14/2013 9:58:00 AM

And many thanks to you too Tahera I love an 'awesome on a comment ' xx

Donna Jones

Date: 3/13/2013 7:17:00 PM

Wow...awesome

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/14/2013 9:58:00 AM

Many thanks Donna xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/13/2013 4:21:00 PM

i like it!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/14/2013 9:57:00 AM

Thanks Ilene xx

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 3/13/2013 9:37:00 AM

Good contest material, Mandy. I'm glad you noted it's a work of fiction, but you've made it very much alive. Well done and good luck to you in the contest. :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/13/2013 7:13:00 AM

This is a fantastic and wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem this morning! What a remarkable piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/14/2013 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Russell xx

Joe Flach

Date: 3/13/2013 7:06:00 AM

Mandy, I wouldn't dare be so bold to attempt to take a piece of you - I cherish my own health and well-being - ;-) Good job and good luck in the contest. Joe

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/13/2013 7:16:00 AM

ha, thanks Joe you are a pal, xx