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A Piece of Coal

Pulled from darkness And into light, born But a short life was ended With a quick burn He was unable to accomplish Every dream Life wasn't as He made it seem He called himself A piece of coal And others joined in Unaware of their toll Pitch black soul Or so people thought But were they just clueless And untaught Just because their expectations He couldn't reach Didn't mean there wasn't A diamond underneath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/20/2012 5:09:00 AM
Beautiful write, love Elizabeth
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Date: 12/10/2011 1:50:00 PM
* "I BELIEVE WE ALL HOLD INSTILLED DEEP INSIDE OURSELVES * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL RACHEL * WE JUST NEED TO SEARCH IT OUT * RECOGNIZE * POLISH ITS SHINING AS BRIGHT AS WE MAY * THEN ONE DAY * NOT EVEN THE TREASURES OF THE WORLD * COULD PURCHASE ITS WORTH * SWEET LOVELY HEARTS VERSE * MY LUV * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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