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A Perspicacious Girl

"She's just a perspicacious girl, peeking past her long dark hair, her finger twisting one dark curl in the candle's golden glare. Oh, she doesn't miss a thing, no matter how she tries, and when they ask about her ring, she answers them with lies. None of them like her anyhow, but they'd love to watch her fall, and they ought to realize by now that she always knows it all. She wonders where that waitress went who was so nice the other day, and she wonders what he could have meant when he smiled at her that way. He's gone this time for good; she's already figuring it out, but they keep on telling her she should give him the benefit of the doubt. His ring is in her pocket and her heart is in there too, but she's trying not to understand the where, when, why, and who. Every time the door gets opened by all the people coming in here, she can feel another hope end and the truth becoming all too clear. Her life was one big holiday - she was feeling so fantastic - but now everything she has to say comes out sounding so sarcastic."

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Date: 4/3/2024 12:07:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:23:00 PM
NANCY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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